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100 word challenge/steal challenge

Alma was a curious girl , but one day her  life changed. she was wondering down an alley way  when she stopped at a terrifying sight. ” Oh my, how do I stop this”! she whispered  from inside her overly large bright pink  jumper. her jaw dropped to the ground, standing right infront of her, four gigantic tubes made from cement were pumping out white smoke heading to the sky. Alma ran home, she worked hard,  by morning she shouted ” I did it”!!! she took the invention  outside and in seconds the sky went lovely light blue. Alma had saved the town!

100 word challenge/ Fossils

night at the museum was terrifying for Charlie the fossils night worker.  his job was to guard the fossils all night and make sure no one broke into the building. but one night, just one night something happened that will never ever be forgotten. a strange man in black snuck up behind Charlie and grabbed him by the neck. chocking and getting no air into his lungs, Charlie fell to the ground and died!  the man kept wondering around until he saw one amazing fossil. inside the box was a giant sphere crafted by fossils. he stole it and left!

100 word challenge/ confused

It was five years ago when something tragic happened, my birthday was Gone!!! it all started when I supposedly woke up on my birthday and checked my alarm clock when it read Saturday the 4th of December when it should have been Friday the 3rd. I started to panic my face lost all expression and I felt sick in my stomach , had I not celebrated my birthday!!!!! just then my sister walked in and I was very confused , :last night she caught me sleep working and saw me pick up my alarm clock and change the date 1 day infront. Yay!

“Stairs”

it was last term, my class were going on an excursion to the town museum to study the world of books and history of back in the day. while we waited for the tour to start and get ready, me and my friends decided to go and use our spending money at the candy bar . as we were Waiting  I noticed that there was an odd door!  as the lollie line got shorter I decided to investigate, but before I could say another word a hand reached out from behind the door and was gesturing its  finger straight at me!!!!

100 word challenge

it was world war 1 and everything was Explosive . I was only nine when this happened and my younger sister Rachel was only six. my whole family knew that soon our house would be gone, so my family started packing everything that we could fit. Rachel held up the old pocket knife that I used to have . ” Put that down at once”, mum shouted at her. ” Fine”, Rachel replied. after all the hard work of packing we were finally all ready to go! we hopped in the car and turned the key, the car didn’t budge at all and wasn’t starting!!!!!!

100 word challenge

I was five when me and my family went to the Luna park theme festival. the first ride we went on was the house of terror(haunted house) . me and my dad were going on it by ourselves and while my dad bought the tickets my heart started beating faster and faster! my nerves were kicking in as the control worker stepped up to help us get in the cart. slowly I sat down and looked down the what seemed to be a pitch black hallway of what  could be TERROR!! “boo!” shouted the ghost from nowhere. it was so TERRIFYING!!!

phenomenal/100 word challenge

I was four years old when my family went to the Melbourne street festival. above us lights flashed, music bleared and thousands of people flooded around us . we firstly stopped and picked up some pizza for tea and some cotton candy for dessert. next we headed for the flame thrower area, infront  of us was what looked like a young 20 year old woman who was about to put fire down her throat. we watched her tip the magic chemicals into her mouth  while she then lifted up the fire sticks  and slowly put them in her mouth, it was phenomenal!!

it was 1895 in the Australian war, all the troupes were getting ready. the name of the leader was Steve walker, as the bullets shot from the canon he knew it was time. he put on his hat and set of out into the night. later that evening the lady on ward duty got a death defying phone call ” Steve has been shot”! said the officer  sadly. three years later in the home town of south Australia ( mount Gambier) where Steve was born they planted a statue of him in honor of the hard work he put into his fighting career.

100 word challenge

It was last summer. My family decided to go on a holiday. We all knew where we were going : The Magic Theme Park!!! It had one of the biggest roller coasters ever and I was bursting to go on it. It was 12:00 when we stopped , I decided to eat something small so I didn’t vomit it all up on the rides. After lunch we headed straight there when I started feeling a little bit dizzy. I remember saying ” next time I will definitely get something smaller”, and that was just the beginning! All I remember after that was I fainted.

” I’m trying to hold on/100 word challenge

it was late winter  , I was at school in my second lesson .  my classmates were doing their work  until the class door opened  unexpectedly! my teacher said ” it just the wind”. but I knew it was  more than that . when I got home I turned on the tv, the fist thing is saw  was something terrible! the news read” today 11:25  a sixth grader was snatched  and held custody badly  by what the child said to us  was a burglar, he was found hanging from a tree shouting ” I’m trying to hold on”. and that was the end of the news.